As the days roll on, here we stand. Keeping to given course and moving into the closing phase of this saga. Writing for todays post was a gentle reminder that depth is a hairs bredth away. This pursuit words allows me to step into a world wilder than I deemed true.
I refuse to break from the format my initial plan had set out of for each of the 9 planets. Looking into the form I had chosen for Neptune tested my focus and creativity.
Not too long ago I discovered a poetry style called erasure. Its a form of found poetry which involves taking a body of text that already exists and prying a new piece of work out of it, erasing words to leave only the words I wish to inclulde. There in Lies my challenge.
Ill begin by saying a few words about the planet in question today.
Neptune is the 8th planet form the sun. This distance kept it hidden from the acients until 1846. Its one of the ice giants, meaning a ball of hydrogen and other gases. Being the smallest of this family, it still has mass to it, making up for its size in density. Its a little ways off from earth, we originally worked out its positioning using mathamatical predictions, only one spacecraft has flown past neptune, so there is plenty more to be known about this planet.
Mythologically Neptune has been deemed the god of the sea. The greek God poseidon is Neptune, Neptune in the Greek god Poseidon, Trident and all. He was one of the 3 brothers (Zeus, Poseidon and Hades) who retired the titans, he ruled over the oceans. We can safely associate all things aquatic to this deity
My challenge Ivolved taking a piece of existing text to work with. I used an excerpt from “The Voyage Out” by Virginia Wolff, whittling out a poem for Neptune. Truly an exercise in obscurity.
For those who dare to disregard convention, read on.
P.N I will be sharing my meditation on this Found poem on my Facebook page: TheBlissfulNomad
Welcome fellow bloggers, readers and nomadites. This journey into the deep black vastness of our solar system lands us on a Titan. Our previous subject Jupiter is followed by Saturn. When we can separate Saturn from the other nine planets by its great rings. It has over 30 rings and 62 monds. This planet has been known to man for a long ol time. It iz visible in the sky with the naked eye.
Obviously we had to touch on some mythology to add depth to this mighty planet. This planet opens the door to some interesting family affairs. The planet Saturn is linked to Chronos, who was … dum dum dum, a Titan King. Chronos or Saturn was the God of Time.
Now this Titan is tied up in all manners of madness. He had castrated in father (Uranus) and was cautious about his children doing wrong by him, so he swallowed a bunch of them. Eventually there was some kind of family revolt and heads rolled, I couldn’t make this stuff up, it was a family feud for the ages. Essentially we have his Son (Jupiter) and his father (Uranus) either side of him. This might explain why Saturn rotates at such a high speed, hes busy keeping an eye out for each of those two.
Without further delay, here it is folks.
Your past has caused you mischief,
your paranoia looms.
Your patricide has turned the tide
and stalks your many moons.
You stretch your crystal rings
to deter your cunning seed.
You dizzy yourself in vain,
You are the last of a stunning breed,
You are tracing that orbit slowly,
you continue to master time.
Devouring all that fades
Chronos your power binds.
You are living between your kin
Your father and sun for flanks.
Each plotting some hidden sin,
there is power inside your ranks.
Cronus, as old as time
You have been known by many a man.
Since forever before my father,
We can see you from where we stand.
Even as the nights close out without a whisper of life across these pages, there forever remains the lingering promise of content. I never forget.
We are resuming the poetic planetary exploration with a look at Jupiter. This gas giant is the largest planet in our solar system. Methodologically Jupiter is the ruler of the sky, he bares close relations from the Greek Zeus, armed with a lightning bolt he sits at the throne.
Jupiter is the biggest planet in our solar system. Characterized by a gassy atmosphere, which earns it the name Gash Giant, and its sports a bunch a few rings and a lot of moons. Jupiter has the largest mood going. Ganymede, Jupiter’s largest moon, is larger than both Pluto and Mercury. How regal.
Without further delay let me get into it.
I present to you…
Jutting your royal rings into the thicket of this night,
Undying is your might that conjures that cutting light.
Pirouetting moons of many, score the air you breathe,
Inspecting your gaseous skies, in cries of “Glory Be!”
Titan features has this Ganymede who watches where you sleep
Eagle in eye, mighty in frame he rose from Zeus’ keep.
Raging for an age is the storm inside your heart,
the great red spot that rules the thickest of this night.
More planetary goodness at hand. I was not looking forward to writing about this particular planet. The association I have with said planet opens up more doors than I am willing to walk into.
It comes as no surprise than my research for planet earth opened up the mother of all labyrinths, trying to snake some content out of it was a trying affair. I picked a poetry form and go stuck in, playing on information and themes already at hand.
Looking at your face, I meet the gruiling test,
A quest to piece together your former best.
I fail to pierce the black that crowds your features,
You have bled your soul for morbid creatures.
What a host of wealth your body brought to light.
Boasting so much brilliance day and night.
Flora and fauna spawned in vibrant hues of truth,
Only to turn to lies for mortal use.
Your sacrifice has given us centuries of hope.
A gift we are holding close on thinning rope.
You have hosted both parasites and pioneers,
Behind the tears I celebrate the coming years.
The second addition to the planetary poetry is here for your studious consumption. These posts are getting more and more educational by the day. Venus has been a real gem to marvel at.
Second from the sun, yet the brightest and hottest, Venus is our subject for the day. In a mythological context, Venus it is linked with Venus (The God) and Aphrodite. These two deities are linked with beauty, love, passion and eternal youth. I had no idea that Venus is the only planet to spin on its axis in the opposite direction to the other planets, just doing her own thing, and copper is her substance. Lets see what kind of sonnet I can whip up for her majesty, iambic pentameter was attempted for this serving.
Your bosom bursts with passions potent flare,
Rousing up the verve inside my veins.
You hold my inhibitions well impaired,
Your beauty helps to spark the lovers flames.
No rivers run can quench your given power,
Aphrodite, Venus, you are queen.
I dream to drink your touch and never cower
To love, I steep my longing in your stream.
What hope is there for mortal men as me?
What hope to paint my worthiness as true?
That crown of copper opulence I see,
Reminds me that Olympus harbors you.
You are the brightest smile along in this trail.
You are the burning heart where love prevails.
You are first to brace that brazen heat and hold your orbit true. You dare to mingle so closely with the seed of a Titan…
The Solar system, like everything else, is fuel for creative outlet. It can tell story upon story, with angles, stories and legacies tied to every part that has a hand in building the system. This lovely trail of planets starts off with Mercury. For Mercury, mi primera planeta, I dedicate a prose poem.
This I write for you!!
All is clear now. For all the fire in you, I see why the merchants favor you. Your favor has granted them service so fortifying and fortunate it has doubled the coin that aids their keep. How we bundle and build a bounty of riches has so much to be owed to you.
The intricacies of trickery are the secrets song of which you are bard. The timbre of tall tells, the tone of truth has you in its sinews.
You are first to brace that brazen heat and hold your orbit true. You dare to mingle so closely with the seed of a Titan and tell so well of what is built from Olympus. You speak so as we may eat from the fruits of knowledge. Sealing in a sweet garden the nectar, that on winged foot, is trickled to the ear of those that need it most.
From the first note to the last you know to lead from the lighted world to the shadows depth. Along that narrow trail that tracks to the black you offer guidance. When all has lost its stay with the light, to Pluto and Hades you lead. The far reaches of plutos face and hades’ shade are no strange terrain to you.
I didn’t know how to put this forward or make it clear, but here it goes. I’m going to be making some noise in this little space of mine for a little while. I’m working on a little series for the poetry fans who wonder this way, hopefully it will be for fans of any kind of written work. This is something to get me playing with style a little bit more, keep me in touch with the blogger-sphere and fellow writers, I’m calling it …
Poems for Planets!!
Don’t worry, I’m saving the creativity for the actual content, hopefully this allows me a pass on this title.
I’ll open the series on a light note, something to brighten the tone. Here I present to you my opening Haiku.
heavens bands of fire
Washing the earth with light.
Waiting for winter.
-The Blissful Nomad
Stay tuned for the rest of the 9 planets, feel free to play along or share the fun.