Day 1 of writing 201 was the source of intrigue and excitement. Day two is finally here, and it brings with it a very familiar face, the limerick. Today’s assignment suggest a prompt and a device to implement. Based on today’s brief, I have to make use of alliteration, in a limerick to present a journey to you, the reader. Enjoy!
Beneath the brackens bosom, a babbling brook bleeds,
Running free from forests foot, finding flesh in fuller seas.
Fleeting, forgotten moments
Turn trickles to testing torrents,
Beneath bracken the brook begins, in tides of freedom it leads!
The Blissful Nomad 
You have a very good vocabulary and a brilliant touch, a piece worth reading many times!
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Thank you very much, I really so appreciate that. I’m glad that you enjoyed the piece.
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Excellent! I have rarely read the Limerick used this well. 🙂
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Thank you very much!! 🙂 I’m really glad you liked it. I haven’t played with many limericks before. This writing course is proving to be more fun everyday.
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Seriously? You need to stop already! 😜 Amazing!
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Hehe thank you, I tried. Appreciate the response. Hopefully I won’t stop 😊
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Beautifully expressed 🙂 keep it up
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Thank you very much 🙂
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this is really good!
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate that! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Ah it just flowed off the tongue so well. Oddly enough I don’t usually enjoy poems about nature but I felt this one really had something to it. Good job 🙂
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🙂 thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it. It’s kinda tricky to make some things seems interesting to read. I’m glad I could put 5 lines into something entertaining
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You inspire me. Superb skill!
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Thank you very much, that means a lot to hear that from you. I’m glad I could help spread this infection art form.
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I Can’t wait for your next piece. 🙂
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I can’t wait to see what the next prompt will be. It’s successfully thrown me out of my comfort zone each time. I look forward to reading your take on the next challenge too.
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The first line of the poem grabbed me!
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Thank you. Having a opening that can hook has been a point I’ve been working on. I’m glad it worked with this piece.
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This is great! I can hear the brook babbling with all those Bs!
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Wow! You can’t even tell this is a limerick. There’s not a lick of the typical cheesiness. And impressive use of alliteration. I love that you used freedom. That’s where my mind went with this challenge as well.
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I really want to use this course to grow with my poetry, so I’m squeezing as much creativity out of the prompts as I can. Sometimes it pays off. 🙂 I’m glad it did here
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